The Meerkat Who Went to the Great Wall of
China
Hans Wong, G
meerkat named Jack lived together with his best friend John, a human.
then
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One day Jack felt bored and asked John what they should do.
“
Aaaaaah, maybe we can ummmmm,” John murmured.
Then Jack had a brilliant idea, he had been waiting for 8 years to visit the ancient Chinese. So he
decided to make a time machine with John which only took 9 days!
“
Phew, that was hard work wasn’t it?” John said as he wiped the sweat off his head.
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“
Yes it was plenty of hard work!” Jack said as he drank all of his water in his 600 milliliter water bottle.
1
hour later they went inside the time machine and Jack said “I want to go back to three thousand years
ago.” It was the year 2013.
ZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
First, they landed in the time of ancient Greece.
“
I don’t think we’re in the right place John,” Jack said.
“
I don’t either Jack, go into year 560!!!!!!!” John screamed.
John screamed sooooooooooooo loud that his voice nearly came out!
And there they were in the time of the ancient Chinese!
“
I knew it! I just knew it somehow!” John said with excitement. He was sooooooooo excited he jumped and
did 8 back flips in the air.
Then Jack looked at his plan and said,
“
The epic war was in Bao Da Ling so………..LET’S GO TO BAO DA LING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
ZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP!!!! And they landed on the Great Wall of China.
“
AWESOME!!!!,” they both said as they high fived their hands so loudly that the Chinese warriors came.
“
你們是哪裏來的人
?”
“
Um………..how should we answer John? John!!!!????” Jack said as John ran up to one of the warriors
and said :
“
你好嗎
?”
“
我很好
.”
The warrior said in a low voice.
Then Jack said “You say what?” to John.
“
Chinese, Chinese, Chinese dumb brain!!!!!!!!” he said.
“
ATTACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
The epic war had started.
“
BOOM! TIPH! KRACHK!” as the enemies died.
Even Jack helped. He got all his many thousands of meerkat friends to come through the time machine.
They dug holes to create secret tunnels so they could find the enemies’ feet and bite them! They got inside their
shoes and scratched their toes and kept them distracted.
“
BOOM! THUD!” John shot the enemy with a huge cannon.
After the cannon destroyed the other team, they surrendered.
“
VICTORY!!!!!!!!” John screamed. “That was awesome!”
John’s cannon blast ended the epic war.
After that, Jack learned Chinese and he said “
再見
”
to his new warrior friends.
And so having visited the Great Wall and saved the cool warriors from the epic war, Jack and John went
back in the time machine and said bye to their new friends.
ZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP!
They landed back in 2013 and lived happily ever after!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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